Your Shadow
you send me love notes,on pink colored cards.They follow me through cities,I pretend not to care, butthey pierce the rockI call my heart, mellow it to fleshuntil I realize I'm not enclosedfrom the...
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Jennifer:Please refer to my response in Bloomers.However, it requires repeating that your relationship is a radical & ridiculus riposte in need of rehabilitation & reincarnation. But if the...
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Hi Gro,I wrote a poem in anger. I changed the poem.I did a stupid thing by posting some of myprivate, personal life, something I have never doneor will do again.I could say your reply should only be...
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Jenna, A good read. I am not sure of how things are done here, but I must say I have read much poetry written by a person in anger, in bitterness, in a spirit of love or friendship. I have read poetry...
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Hi lanana,Thank you, so very much for your kind words to mypoem. I think, I wrote this poem when I was up-set.You know, I cannot remember. They say memoryis first to go. I don't know who, they are,but...
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Hi Wanda,What a wonderful reply, and I agree with you.Poetry is written from our emotions.I lived outside of the city, but close enoughthat I could see it from my house. When I livedin that house, I...
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My darling lady Jennifer, I must agree with so many of the words written in reply, to your wondefully strong and emotionally wrought poem that came straight from your heart.As you have so rightly...
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Hi Les,You are a charming, and kind man.Thank you, for you wonderful reply to my poem.You know, I can't remember who I was angry with,or even writing the poem. This is the way I ridmyself of stress,...
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Jennifer darlin, I would be MOST upset if you DIDN'T post on AspPs.. Long may you stay with our little site! We love you! MrLeslie. http://p200.ezboard.com/baspiringpoets"
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Hi Jenn,this poem struck me in so many ways ya know, to me it seemed to show the twines of the psychie and how it is all formed, and how one end or shade of it can depend so much on anther (end or...
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oh I just wanted to say that, Jenn, your writing has improved so drastically ! I saw someone else had made that comment or a similiar one and you had thought it luck, in that you had done it twice....
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Hi Al,OH, you are so sweet. Can I say that onAspiringpoets? I will never think anything I write is good.I was only reading the replies. I had alreadyforgotten what this poem was about.I had to re-read...
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